Onward to Perfection! ('Cause I'm Not There Yet)
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| Hull, Duncan "This is what you look like right now by Abstruse Goose (Tell me I'm wrong)" (4/14/2011) via Flickr Attribution-NonCommercial Generic 2.0 Creative Commons License |
I peer reviewed Rachel and Chloe's drafts, and was also peer reviewed by others. What did I take away from this?
Ann Emilie reviewed my Project 3 rough draft. I am very grateful for the feedback that she gave me, and I can definitely see the things I need to change. I still need to include an author bio, image, date and time published, and do a better job of reaching out to my audience. Everything she had to say about my draft was spot on, and I definitely need to go back and refine my writing.
I plan to give more concrete details to really convince my audience, and support my propositions with the right word choice to sway my audience to agree with me. I will finish my art piece so that I can take a picture and upload it to my doc, and I will take a picture of myself for the author bio as well.
I feel like I'm headed in the right direction with my draft, I just need to cross over into final draft status by revising and adding to what I already have.
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