Reflection on Open Letter Draft

When You Feel Like a Badass

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I reviewed Ann Emilie's Draft, and she reviewed mine. Her comments were very helpful and constructive, and I will make good use of them. I will also answer some questions that will help in my revision process. Overall, I received a lot of support and seem to be heading in the right direction!

Did you demonstrate an ability to think about your writing and yourself as a writer?
Yes, I did, but I needed more examples to really give my audience some context.

Did you provide analysis of your experiences, writing assignments, or concepts you have learned?
Sort of, I had left out a lot of actual experiences and assignments as references, but I had a good description  of the concepts I have learned.

Did you provide concrete examples from your own writing (either quotes from your writing or rich descriptions of your writing process)?
Nope, I need to go back and do that.

Did you explain why you made certain choices and whether those choices were effective?
Yes, and no. I need to include more evidence to make it clear.

Did you use specific terms and concepts related to writing and the writing process?
Yes, I used quite a few writing terms, but I may need to include more concepts.